Malo e lelei bloggers. I have been working on a piece of creative writing. I chose an image to write about. My story is about a the leave. the man was made a paper plang and he throw the paper plang and it was gulling the man said i like it he said. he can jump high to catching the leaves and he like it. they the sun is up on the sky and it was hot.
Friday, 12 June 2020
creative writiing
Malo e lelei bloggers. I have been working on a piece of creative writing. I chose an image to write about. My story is about a the leave. the man was made a paper plang and he throw the paper plang and it was gulling the man said i like it he said. he can jump high to catching the leaves and he like it. they the sun is up on the sky and it was hot.
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hi my name is Enzo gee and i am a year six at kaingaroa school. I like your creative writing. and also in your next blog post add more punctuation but very goooooood job😀😀😀😀😃😃😃
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Ashwin and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like your poem that said man was made a paper plang It made me think about my creative writing. Have you thought about adding some more to it to make it better? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei,I am Noe from St Mary's School I like that you used Tongan for your greeting,I am Tongan are you? and maybe you could use more descriptive words to make you writing better.
ReplyDeletePlease visit my blog
https://saintmarysgisnoef.blogspot.com/
Mā te wā
Noe
Kia ora Nicholas,
ReplyDeleteI am Morgan from St Mary’s School.
I really liked how you added a photo.
I learnt that you use the same greeting we are using this week.
Maybe you could use some descriptive words to describe the man in your story.
Mā te wā
Morgan